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Afgun · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 6:01 am

Greetings.Im new here can some one tell me
where the toilet is?
Here is my first digital drawing.And its not
finished yet. It will be a wallpaper for a friend of mine. Maybe you all can give me some advice and tips how to refine it.
(Hope my link works)

[ October 30, 2001: Message edited by: Afgun ]

Afgun · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 7:45 am

I managed it! Now critics are very welcome.

Afgun · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 8:21 am

Why is none replying.I`s my work so Bad?
Anyway here is the rough scetch.

[ October 30, 2001: Message edited by: Afgun ]

notic · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 9:20 am

man you have to calmn down, its like one hour between your posts, people post when they've got the time.

i think the sketch is pretty good its just
something wierd about the pose, and as far as i've understood, you should'nt create alla details at once, start with the basic colorscheme and dont care about highlighting and shadowing. and play around with different colors

squirrelstars · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 3:06 pm

hey. to me, the best looking part in your semi-finished piece is the left leg starting from waist to the beggining of the boot.. its the best thought out portion and also the best colored and detailed. if you can make the rest of the work look as tight as that bit, you'd be doing very well.

Highfive · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 5:02 pm

Welcome the the forums, Afgun. Down the hall and second to your left - and you might want to block your nose when you go in, too.

The left leg does have the best looking muscle tone in pic. To me, it doesn't look like the other leg and the torso have been given the same care. Also, I think the pectorals could be 50% taller on his chest, cos Logan seems to be sporting a very large set of abs there.

Everything else on there is great, though. Nicely done!

Shiro_tengu · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 5:23 pm

Afgun, don't worry if it takes a while to get a responce. And also somtimes people don't say anything cos they like the drawing.

Personally - I never get enough feedback

but I think your pic rocks. Well done.

Dryfire · Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 6:51 pm

Good job, you should make the pectoral(chest) muscles bigger thoguh, and maybe define the lightsource better... I also noticed that your claws are pretty rigid.. and are comming out crooked from his hand. you might want to fix that, and add some perspective to them as well....

its comming along nicely!

Afgun · Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2001 1:24 am

I thank you all guys. I will try to follow your advice. The only problem is that I created the whole color (except the wolf) on one layer.

But I will manage it