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CluelessMorgan
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2001 6:34 pm     Reply with quote
Tis in a similar style to that of Witchblade. I know the body needs work but what do you think.

I think that it is turning out all right I know there are a lot of mistakes.

Please tell me what I need to improve on.

Thanks

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CluelessMorgan
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 2:59 am     Reply with quote
Does anyone have any helpful hints that they could pass on??
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Snyper
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 3:13 am     Reply with quote
Hmmm I'm no expert, but the space between the eyes looks a bit wide. Also, the nose seems a bit wide for a woman's face. It could be the perspective though. I like what you've done with the hair so far.

I'm trying to place who that looks like. Be sure to post it again when you've come along further with it.
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NatashaEpperson
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 29, 2001 9:10 pm     Reply with quote


The red overlines I made are some guidlines and corrections. Your curvature is wrong. Made circles and lines for placement. Think about porportions as well. Your porportions are way off. A good start though. Keep trying.
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