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mkart · Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 10:31 am

Well basically im looking for some crit on this before i start the hair i'd like to get the face sorted out, also thinking of changing the hair (not sure what ive done with it in the basic shape really, any ideas?)

Think my lighting is way off

Some useful crit would be great, im still very much in need of guidance

Thanx

Svanur · Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 10:57 am

You seem off to a good start, the only thing I can suggest is level the nose a bit and check the space between the eyes and nose.

FireFry · Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 12:42 pm

It's coming along very nicely. The only thing that looks wierd to me is the angle of her left shoulder in relation to her right.

Xeo · Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 4:02 pm

Looks pretty good, teh value is pretty good, but some of the form is a little bit off. Her left eye (on the right side from our view) seems to be a little bit to close to the edge of her face, I think it needs to be slightly closer to her nose. And like someone already said, the nose needs to be evened up a little, great picture though! :-D

Icannon · Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 5:24 pm

you should look at a few references when doing heads. the eyes are pretty wonky- too slanted, and the lashes look like mini eye brows. the bottom lip is a little too v-shaped. a wide u-shape would probably look nicer, but of course, she might just be making that expression. the whole head should actually be wider (well, on the left where it's looking pretty thin). nose is too small, but that could be the style of the thing. keep going.

mkart · Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 12:41 am

Thanx

never noticed the nose was wonky, and the eye too, guess i have been staring at the same image too long. Can see it now

will have to go and play around with her a bit (!)

LeChuck · Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 5:02 pm

Whoa dude! YOu just need to get the hair thing down. Then you will be all set.

NukleoN · Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 7:34 pm

Greetings..

I would check the size of the neck...perhaps narrow it down, make the shoulders a bit wider (even tho females often have narrow shoulders) just not that narrow. I straighten the nose a slight bit and round off the top of the eyes so they are not so flat...looking good..probably I'd add more contrast with some shadowing...

Keep up the good work..

NukleoN

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