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kad
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 Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 10:10 am |
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This is a piece that I have been working on this weekend.
If anyone sees anything I should look at /change in this early stage, your input would be very welcome.
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Duracel
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| Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 10:37 am |
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I miss something combine the elf with the foreground.. perhaps you put his hand push the leafs to the side
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Duracel
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| Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2001 4:15 pm |
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If he will come back to look at his Topic?
Oh.. i dont like it to reply if it is for nothing. |
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kad
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| Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 8:09 am |
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Dura i came back and checked, and i like your idea. I have been thinking about adding his right hand coming up and pulling back the leaves.
I am alweays happy to get any critiques so i always come back and check  |
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Dildomatron
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| Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2001 7:22 pm |
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| I think dura's suggestion is not a good one. IF said suggestion were taken into such consideration so as to be fallowed(such as in the first reply) it would/did ruin the subject. It takes away from what is really the main part of this peice of art(the elf's face)blagh blagh blagh, this may sound like I have no eye for art but, here it goes anyway, I would rather look at a face than a stupid hand, the hand is not the main part of this and putting in the foreground in such a mannor negates this. |
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