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slappy
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Joined: 22 Jun 2001
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2001 10:13 am     Reply with quote
Hi there guys,

I’ve been coming to this site for about a week now and have really been impressed with what you guys are doing so feeling inspired by your work I tried to make my first digital painting. I know the character is not all that original (sort of a Joe camel meets the lion king type of thing), and the anatomy is a little screwy, but I would like to get some crits on the painting. This is my first painting from a line drawing so I would appreciate any comments you might have.

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dr . bang
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Joined: 07 Apr 2000
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2001 10:28 am     Reply with quote
AHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That looks EXACTLY like a camel man! Put a cigarrete on his mouth and you're done!
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NullTygre
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2001 11:15 pm     Reply with quote
Your shadows could be bit more gray, Mr. Camel looks a little too red now. Funny character though
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NukleoN
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2001 11:52 pm     Reply with quote
Hey there,

The shapes seem undefined, and the painting is not helping this...there are some rolls in the neck but I can't tell what they're doing...so I'd work on defining those forms better.

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