Sijun Forums :: View topic - the agony- wip crit

SpiralEye · Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 4:41 pm

Do you want more crits than just the face?
The face actually looks okay to me, but the face is really big on the one crouched over and her arms are really short!

IMHO

Dryfire · Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 6:08 pm

That is Awsomely Sick! i like it a lot

N8X · Posted: Tue May 22, 2001 11:06 pm

just finished the Dune novels and wanted to do a scene of the Agony- the ritual where reverand mothers are raised.

i ve been having trouble with the perspective of the womens face who is lying prone.

N8X · Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 10:22 am

spiraleye: well i wanted the suk doctor to be shorter and older then the rest. I guess im missing someting then, maybe her back is to large? Keep in mind this is about 50% done at most.
hpefully ill get a chance to work on it tonight after work.

dryfire: thx, i like sick

jorgy · Posted: Wed May 23, 2001 7:32 pm

I dig!!!

shardik · Posted: Thu May 24, 2001 5:37 pm

i like the one on the far right the best... altho it looks like a man instead of a female.. i dont know if they are all supposed to be female or not.. i never read the book

HardCoil · Posted: Thu May 24, 2001 11:04 pm

Well..it screamed DUNE at me before I read that that was what it's supposed to do. So you are doing SOMETHING right