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dysphoria
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 13, 2001 10:29 pm     Reply with quote
This is just a rough sketch of one of my first pics with the wacom pad in painter. Basically I need any ideas and crits I can get..if the pic doesn't show up here's the link: http://members.aol.com/crykillanddie/private/animeslutsketch.JPG

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Mike
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 14, 2001 12:37 pm     Reply with quote
read http://www.antsin3d.com/loomis/page25.jpg

look especially at no 2, 3

the anatomy is off too. the head looks too big in proportion to the body.
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XxPZxX
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 14, 2001 8:12 pm     Reply with quote
Yeah some of the basics are messed so look at the link mike gave but for being a cartoon style it is somewhat forgiveable. I like the look of it. I have always liked the "scribbled" look and you did a good job on it! It doesn't look like you spent too much time on it though so sorry if you did =D try going for a bit more detailed drawing next time and get the basics down.
Then again I am no expert just giving my 2 cents.

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dysphoria
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 14, 2001 8:21 pm     Reply with quote
No offense taken at all..I just scribbled it out..I have taken a look and make some adjustments when I have time.

Keep the crits coming

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