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Topic : "my first post here! please critique my picture" |
replicant junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Feb 2001 Posts: 49 Location: Alabama
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 9:39 pm |
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i hope all of you enjoy this.. its my first post here. ) enjoy!
i hope this works..
[image]http://www.auburn.edu/~messesb/pirate.jpg[/image]
if that doesn't work then : http://www.auburn.edu/~messesb/pirate.jpg |
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Dthind member
Member # Joined: 12 Dec 2000 Posts: 436
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 9:43 pm |
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Your usage of UBB is a little off, you may want to read the FAQ.
The image is in in its infancy, but is a start, keep refining...
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in the 92656 and the 949
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philjaeger Guest
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 10:47 pm |
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use reference for the figure, work with the background, add more, watch line weight - the planets? are too heavy in comparison with the rest of the pict., erase the pencil drawing - make it black on white, not black and kinda light gray. it would nice to see you spend more time on this piece and really get it going.
Phil |
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