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Member # Joined: 01 Nov 2000 Posts: 134 Location: Arkansas, USA
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 7:26 pm |
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Pretty new stuff for me. It's still so hard for me to see 3-D. I get linear perspective with no problem, but when it comes to rounded forms I suck. Anyway, please tell me what ya think 'bout it.
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gammprog junior member
Member # Joined: 23 Jan 2001 Posts: 20 Location: Australia
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 9:39 pm |
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The drawing looks pretty good. Looks like something out of sonic the hedgehog , but the rendering of the image I wouldn�t say is good. Not enough definition, too flat and too many highlights that look like they don�t belong. That is what I think anyway.
You could try and add more shadows and make highlights less white. You could also have the light coming from one direction because it looks like you don�t have any light source.
From what you have said you haven�t done much rendering of images. It is a good try though. If you keep at it you should be able to create some wonderful images.
Do you use the airbrush for shading and highlights? Doesn�t look like you do.
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glitch13 junior member
Member # Joined: 05 Feb 2001 Posts: 12 Location: New Orleans, LA, USA
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 10:14 pm |
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looks like your doing the whole 'afraid to make the shading too dark' syndrome. just fly with it, add a lot of contrast, don't worry about how it will come out, just shade it how you see fit, it'll be fine. |
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