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Rag
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 7:26 pm     Reply with quote

Pretty new stuff for me. It's still so hard for me to see 3-D. I get linear perspective with no problem, but when it comes to rounded forms I suck. Anyway, please tell me what ya think 'bout it.

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gammprog
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 9:39 pm     Reply with quote
The drawing looks pretty good. Looks like something out of sonic the hedgehog , but the rendering of the image I wouldn�t say is good. Not enough definition, too flat and too many highlights that look like they don�t belong. That is what I think anyway.

You could try and add more shadows and make highlights less white. You could also have the light coming from one direction because it looks like you don�t have any light source.

From what you have said you haven�t done much rendering of images. It is a good try though. If you keep at it you should be able to create some wonderful images.

Do you use the airbrush for shading and highlights? Doesn�t look like you do.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 10:14 pm     Reply with quote
looks like your doing the whole 'afraid to make the shading too dark' syndrome. just fly with it, add a lot of contrast, don't worry about how it will come out, just shade it how you see fit, it'll be fine.
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