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Member # Joined: 01 Sep 2000 Posts: 75 Location: Savannah, GA USA
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2001 11:32 pm |
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Two images here. The first was inspired by a sketch of Vebourn's. I thought it was a cool pose, but i think i butchered it.. I think I may work on it though. What do you think?
The next is from the friday life drawing session here at school. I know i have a long way to go on line quality and light, but I think my forms are coming along a bit. This almost looks like her. I'm still at the stage where i draw a lot and then erase till it looks right.. heh Any crits/suggestions would be great.
Thanks,
Ryan |
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tzekin member
Member # Joined: 25 May 2000 Posts: 112 Location: Calgary, Canada
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2001 11:55 pm |
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The pose in the first image is a good one. I like it. Maybe if you clean the lines a bit the image will look better.
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Member # Joined: 01 Sep 2000 Posts: 75 Location: Savannah, GA USA
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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 3:02 am |
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Hmm color ideas...
kinda funky
ryan |
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Bubonic member
Member # Joined: 21 Sep 2000 Posts: 209 Location: Long Island, NY, US
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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 8:02 am |
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nice pics, i like the face but the ear doesn't look right.
I like the coloring of the sketch, but the breast pointing to you is a bit flat and wide.
and the leg, the butt shouldn't show from the angle.
I like her face and her hair, lips look good too. Finish it up, i wanna see it |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2001 1:30 pm |
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ooooh I realy like your second pose.. very nice....
Id concentrate more on that one.
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