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MD-02-Geist
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 Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2000 5:36 am |
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Hi ... here is a new pic from me.
I am still in testing out the program... so i post a lot of pics i do, because with the critique i hope to improve my skills... so plz help me...
THX
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Solitaire
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| Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2000 6:56 am |
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hmm the hand looks more like a wrench if you get my point there. And his pose doesn't look that natural as he has a cramp feel and I am not sure about how he holds that stick.
where does the light come from? I guess he's alone in the wilderness or are there more people with torches as the light isn't provided by the moon that way you set it.
Ahh wait I scribble down what else there is as sth on his feet just struck me....
well I added some thoughts on lighting and the circumstances like wind and the direction his body is bend - I have some problems there as you might see now.
I followed the directions of his legs which is indicated by the positioning of 1. the feet and 2. the cape...
sth's wrong - you see?
I hope that helped; don't take it as rejection  |
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MD-02-Geist
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| Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2000 7:06 am |
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Ne danke ... das hat mir schon geholfen 
THX
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Infinity
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| Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2000 7:30 am |
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dann ist ja gut
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El Caseron
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| Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2000 7:39 am |
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lol... germans reunite 
[edit] including austrians
[This message has been edited by El Caseron (edited December 26, 2000).] |
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Solitaire
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| Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2000 7:40 am |
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| you should stick to english so other parties can participate the discussion |
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MD-02-Geist
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| Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2000 7:49 am |
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With your help i improved the picture a bit... but not the legs ... was not possible.
And i didnt light it up as in your picture because this is the moon and not one of these lights in a football stadium
THX for helping
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[This message has been edited by MD-02-Geist (edited December 26, 2000).] |
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