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Topic : "Portrait of a Rose [please critique]" |
sacrelicious member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 2000 Posts: 1072 Location: Isla Vista, CA
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 3:45 pm |
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I like this a lot! I think deeper shadows are in order, perhaps more detail on the outer petals, and sharpen the blurry edges. Your pinks could be a bit more vibrant if you really want to push it. This piece, to me, begs for hyperrealism- tiny details like veins in the petals, small drops of dew maybe... oh jeez, I'm rambling. So in conclusion, good job. We should continue this conversation later at a designated break period. Sincerely, Homer Simpson. Uh, wait, I mean-
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mmm... sacrelicious |
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waylon member
Member # Joined: 05 Jul 2000 Posts: 762 Location: Milwaukee, WI US
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 4:30 pm |
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It's a schooner!
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Very nice. I agree with Sacrelicious, though. I would love to see this pushed a little bit farther. Those few extra little details would take this so much farther, especially since you've already done such a good job with the colors and form. |
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WICKED member
Member # Joined: 19 Oct 2000 Posts: 275 Location: FL
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 6:49 pm |
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very nice indeed.
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Burrfunk junior member
Member # Joined: 16 Dec 2000 Posts: 15 Location: Morgan Hill, CA, US
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 7:04 pm |
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Thanks for all your coments guys... I'll put to use some of your suggestions and see what I come up with.
Thanks again.
Michael
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Burrfunk junior member
Member # Joined: 16 Dec 2000 Posts: 15 Location: Morgan Hill, CA, US
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 12:12 am |
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Hi... I just wanted to know what everyone thought of this piece. So plz let me know.
Thanks -Michael
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krefelder junior member
Member # Joined: 03 Dec 2000 Posts: 29 Location: Germany
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 12:16 am |
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Actually, I really like it =) The only thing I could possibly see is maybe it's missing a few shadows in the middle? Correct me if I am wrong. But I really like the overall look =)
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Burrfunk junior member
Member # Joined: 16 Dec 2000 Posts: 15 Location: Morgan Hill, CA, US
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 12:43 am |
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yeah... it probably does need some more shadows, thanks for your input. |
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