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Author   Topic : "Portrait of a Rose [please critique]"
sacrelicious
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 3:45 pm     Reply with quote
I like this a lot! I think deeper shadows are in order, perhaps more detail on the outer petals, and sharpen the blurry edges. Your pinks could be a bit more vibrant if you really want to push it. This piece, to me, begs for hyperrealism- tiny details like veins in the petals, small drops of dew maybe... oh jeez, I'm rambling. So in conclusion, good job. We should continue this conversation later at a designated break period. Sincerely, Homer Simpson. Uh, wait, I mean-

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waylon
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 4:30 pm     Reply with quote
It's a schooner!

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Very nice. I agree with Sacrelicious, though. I would love to see this pushed a little bit farther. Those few extra little details would take this so much farther, especially since you've already done such a good job with the colors and form.
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WICKED
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 6:49 pm     Reply with quote
very nice indeed.
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Burrfunk
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 17, 2000 7:04 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks for all your coments guys... I'll put to use some of your suggestions and see what I come up with.

Thanks again.

Michael

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Burrfunk
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 12:12 am     Reply with quote
Hi... I just wanted to know what everyone thought of this piece. So plz let me know.





Thanks -Michael


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krefelder
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 12:16 am     Reply with quote
Actually, I really like it =) The only thing I could possibly see is maybe it's missing a few shadows in the middle? Correct me if I am wrong. But I really like the overall look =)

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Burrfunk
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 12:43 am     Reply with quote
yeah... it probably does need some more shadows, thanks for your input.
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