[Jezebel]

Here's a 30 minute figure I did in my drawing class this morning. Usually my figures come out looking more like contour drawings, where almost all of the white of the page shows through. But in this case, I only had one sheet of paper left in my sketchbook, and unfortunately it had been rubbed up against an older charcoal drawing and got quite dirty. To try and cover that up, I worked much darker than I usually do and I made an attempt to cover the entire page. I'm very pleased with the result.

Please excuse the weird choppiness, my scanner is not very large so I have to make several passes and piece the image back together in photoshop. Looks kinda strange, I know





This is my first life drawing class so I'm not as far along as most people here, but I do hope for some good critiques. Thanks!

-Beth

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[Skeezer]

Very nice job Jezebel.

One thing I've noticed is that the line of the stomach doesn't match up with the placement of the pectoral muscles.

You're gonna want to get away from drawing creases to indicate stomach muscles, but that may have been how it looked, I don't know.

Anyway, keep working its looking good

-Skeez

[A.Buttle]

Nice love handles on that dude. The bone on his shoulders (i.e., where your collar bone meets your top-most ribs and arm) looks a little too pointy. It's almost as if his arm was dislocated and just hanging, thus distorting the natural forms of the flesh and allowing light to fall upon it in that manner. Zip.

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[Chapel]

Looks nothing like me.

[[Shizo]]

Take off your pants! It's ok, i am gay.

hehehehhe..

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[Jezebel]

Thanks Skeez. I'm not too good at drawing abs, this is probably my best attempt thus far. We tend to gave very... umm... non-muscular models, hehe. But this model will be coming back Thursday. Will be good for more practice

A. Buttle - The guy actually had quite angular bone structure around the shoulders. But I see what you mean with the shoulder, I didn't quite give it enough room to be a shoulder. Looks more like a cube-in-socket than a ball-in-socket joint

Thanks for the comments, except for Shizo. He's just plain weird

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[Jezebel]

Here are a couple others from the same guy today. These are both about 10 minute ones:




-Beth

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[This message has been edited by Jezebel (edited December 05, 2000).]

[[Shizo]]

ehehhe me weird? Whateverr.. anywas. Did you get to see his pee-pee (or even poo-poo)? eggehahahahLOL!!!
*laffs*

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