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kimzoll member
Member # Joined: 27 Nov 2000 Posts: 184 Location: copenhagen , denmark
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 1:44 am |
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This are some of the newer stuff Im been doing in my free time, I made the model sheet and logos in Photoshop.
Kim
[This message has been edited by kimzoll (edited November 30, 2000).] |
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sear member
Member # Joined: 29 Sep 2000 Posts: 443 Location: switzerland
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 1:58 am |
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was it supposed to be a thumbnail?
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kimzoll member
Member # Joined: 27 Nov 2000 Posts: 184 Location: copenhagen , denmark
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 4:42 am |
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now it works  |
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EviLToYLeT member
Member # Joined: 09 Aug 2000 Posts: 1216 Location: CA, USA
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 5:02 pm |
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Hehe. looks great. But if you have extra time or going for the technical look. box the drawings and then have a line from it going to a description of the part. It looks really cool as far as i can see! (just fill in some more of that white space. |
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kimzoll member
Member # Joined: 27 Nov 2000 Posts: 184 Location: copenhagen , denmark
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Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 12:50 am |
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Eviltoylet,
thanks for the critic, Ive thought about that and I decided to go for the more simple graphic display to let the drawings breath, you know, have some space around them, a model sheet gets crowded pretty fast and were to put your focus gets confusing all of a sudden.
Kim |
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Joachim member
Member # Joined: 18 Jan 2000 Posts: 1332 Location: Norway
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Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 12:52 am |
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looks very cool, what's it for ?
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kimzoll member
Member # Joined: 27 Nov 2000 Posts: 184 Location: copenhagen , denmark
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Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 1:06 am |
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Joachim,
I made it for my portfolio, the last months of the animationschool. Im slowly starting to build my own world and have more of these modelsheets, Ill post some more over the next couple of weeks.
Kim  |
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Justin Kramer member
Member # Joined: 03 Nov 2000 Posts: 143 Location: Ithaca, NY
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Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 9:01 am |
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The character renderings are great, but I found all the colors a little distracting. One or two colors would be nicer, IMO. Also, the red on black labels are hard to read.
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kimzoll member
Member # Joined: 27 Nov 2000 Posts: 184 Location: copenhagen , denmark
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Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 9:21 am |
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justin, sorry about that, I had to make it this small, other wise the file would be to big.
thanks anyway
Kim |
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Rinaldo member
Member # Joined: 09 Jun 2000 Posts: 1367 Location: Adelaide, Australia
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Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 9:29 am |
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Ahh...I couldn't see them before. now that they come up, I have to say they're very nice kimzoll. |
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synj member
Member # Joined: 02 Apr 2000 Posts: 1483 Location: San Diego
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Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2000 9:50 am |
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yo, i really like the far right guy running ehehe that rocks. building worlds is probably the most fun thingie to do ever. keep us posted on how this comes along! weeee
-synj www.synj.net |
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Bilbo member
Member # Joined: 31 May 2000 Posts: 356 Location: Israel
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Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 12:22 am |
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Hi Kimzoll... i really dig your style , especialy that character in the center..
as for the design- the basic layout is quite good, but all these images are scattered around in an uncomfortable manner- as someone already suggested- try using less colors on the sketches, and use a grid to align them so that the composition will be "steadier". i'd get rid entirely of the small figures on the central-right part of the design- they're too small to be appreciated , and they add unnecessary clutter. |
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kimzoll member
Member # Joined: 27 Nov 2000 Posts: 184 Location: copenhagen , denmark
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 11:23 am |
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thanks for your replies again, guys
Justin and bilbo thanks for giving some good crit, Ill take it into consideration
Kim |
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