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Kaput
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 9:20 am     Reply with quote
Need some critique on these two sketches. Some stuff that I do know sucks...
on the alien from X-com (comic book style), the gun is a bit bent, I was drawing freehand... and on the vampire(cartoonish), the ear is really messed up.



Thanks,
Kaput


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 9:16 pm     Reply with quote
Those are awesome man,!! Like the detail! u should make the guys neck on the top a bit smaller though and his head a bit bigger. The dude on the bottom, i think you made the fang go inward too much, look at yer own teeth in a mirror and just try to think about wut they would look like longer.

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Kaput
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 10:57 am     Reply with quote
Thanks for the crit!

Kaput
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