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Kaput member
Member # Joined: 03 Feb 2000 Posts: 61 Location: NC
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Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 9:20 am |
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Need some critique on these two sketches. Some stuff that I do know sucks...
on the alien from X-com (comic book style), the gun is a bit bent, I was drawing freehand... and on the vampire(cartoonish), the ear is really messed up.
Thanks,
Kaput
[This message has been edited by Kaput (edited December 02, 2000).] |
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Dryfire member
Member # Joined: 21 May 2000 Posts: 945 Location: Long Island, NY
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Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2000 9:16 pm |
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Those are awesome man,!! Like the detail! u should make the guys neck on the top a bit smaller though and his head a bit bigger. The dude on the bottom, i think you made the fang go inward too much, look at yer own teeth in a mirror and just try to think about wut they would look like longer.
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Kaput member
Member # Joined: 03 Feb 2000 Posts: 61 Location: NC
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2000 10:57 am |
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Thanks for the crit!
Kaput |
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