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synj
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 Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 10:23 am |
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no criticism, sorry. but i will say that i did enjoy reading through them all! 
wait yes i have criticism. in my opinion i'd work on the look of the characters so they have more of a trademark. just a suggestion tho
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Binke
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| Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 11:38 am |
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These look fine.
Although I didnt find them that funny, but yeah hehe. Try strips about stuff that people can relate to..always makes it funnier.
Agree with synj's comment.
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Sergenth
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| Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 1:22 pm |
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Strip 1 - Funny strip, reminds me of Penny Arcade Tycho and Gabe interaction, but without the wang 
Strip 2 - Kinda funny/thoughful (not as good as wacky/funny or demented/funny for me - ersonal taste). Reminds me of a Cathy cartoon where the character thinks of something and the punchline is merely frowning at misfortune.
Strip 3 - Unfunniest of the bunch. Not shocking enough, plus us technically inclined people know you can't easily remove the glass, rolers and toner applicators from the inside of a copy machine. Saturday Night Live capitalized on funny copy machine with the fake commercial "Assjet 2000", so where the characters face is in your strip, I see a plastic molded ass-seat
Strip 4 - Another Cathy joke. If any of the kids in Foxtrot left home to live at their own place, they'd say this too. Kinda funny... but not quite. Mother should have a glib expression rather than a smile.
Strip 5 - Reminds me of the over the top sexual and necropheliac comedy of the Thin-H line.
Strip 6 - Excellent. Penny Arcade subterfugal comedy! Making a bad thing like spilling coffee... worse or in this case weird! |
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A.Buttle
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| Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 4:43 pm |
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Here's one that I did.*
*That is, if by "I" you mean "Max Cannon," and by "did" you mean "shaved my testicles with a rusty beard trimmer."
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[This message has been edited by A.Buttle (edited November 28, 2000).] |
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Solitaire
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| Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2000 4:52 pm |
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sth I made a while back
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Jaymo
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| Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2000 8:38 am |
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Just wanted to add I liked 1, 2 and 6 best.
1 and 2 made me laugh sadly. The rest is ok, i guess. Maybe try to improve that emotional expression (esp. the guy at the copier). |
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