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Speed3D
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 Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 12:53 am |
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I posted this image as part of the November <cough>...was hoping you guys could rip it to shreds so I can improve 
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Bubonic
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 5:09 am |
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| nice textures and shading,but the shadow under the god doesn't look right, and the tail seems too big and thick for a dog.. |
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hennifer
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 9:03 am |
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thats because its a mongoose. 
i really like the image.. the style of it meshes with the subject. it kind of looks like a japanese silkscreen or something.
i agree with bubonic about the shadow. it looks funny to have such a dark shadow on the ground when everything else on the ground is so light, AND the cobra doesn't even seem to be casting a shadow.
the only other thing i'd work on is the mongoose's hands, esp the one holding the sword.
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 9:03 am |
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| the angle fo the cobra head doesn't match with the reast of the body. |
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Bare Bonez
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| Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2000 10:29 am |
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It's funny, I like it .
Animals in people's clothing is always funny.
Anyway, detail and shading is impressive. Maybe a background & dynamic lighting could improve it, but it's already really impressive! |
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