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Topic : "me ... improved??" |
TheEyeless member
Member # Joined: 05 Nov 2000 Posts: 83 Location: austria
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2000 10:15 am |
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hmm... i don't think so.
but plz comment these pics.
hmm....
tusken raider?!???
ohh.. this sux.
and the last one.
ok.. that was it.
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Tiger Eaten member
Member # Joined: 17 Nov 2000 Posts: 226 Location: Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2000 10:32 am |
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I like both the Tuskan raider and your last pic. The first and third I find a little difficult to read. And what I have been able to read of the first has scared me badly enough to concentrate on the Tuskan raider and last pic only. The raider has got personality, nice brown shades too, I personally find brown can be somewhat difficult to work with at times. It's a very clear lined picture and bares very little resemblance to your other 3 pictures, you might want to try a few more like this and develop this side of your work. The last picture, while I don't quite understand what it is, it does produce a reaction. I think of it as perhaps some sort of evil monolith or a container for something terrible. Nice. You seem to like to work with dark which is fine but don't keep things too much in the shadows or your design will be lost as will be your work. I like to hide what I can't draw in darkness, which is why my most frequent works are 800X600 screens of black pixels.
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TheEyeless member
Member # Joined: 05 Nov 2000 Posts: 83 Location: austria
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2000 1:19 pm |
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yea u are right. i saw so many lineart things here, so i tried to do it myself.
i am not that satisfied with it (e.g. his left hand).
and: ur wish is my command... ( ) ill do more of these |
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[Shizo] member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 3938
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2000 2:55 pm |
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Hey Eyeless, you forgot to include some of your early paintings..
The meaning of 'improve' is to go from something, to better. How can i judge on your improvement without seeing the first half? =]
No offence brother.. here's a glass of vodka for you! *gulp*
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