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ime
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ime
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| Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2000 5:30 am |
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no comments at all?  |
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| Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2000 6:19 am |
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| It looks nice, I like it so far. But there's a little something wrong with the eyes... too much on the same level, bu the head is slightly tilted. The entire image seems stretched on Y, but that's ok I guess. =) |
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Ramiranda
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| Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2000 6:26 am |
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I repainted your pic to show you what was wrong in proportions,colours,Light etc..
I hope you understand the idea.
**The noise is too big and wide.You must retouch it.And thats all. |
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eetu
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| Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2000 6:33 am |
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i think the original was better..
it's just elongated vertically, but i thought that was a deliberate style choice..
dunno
eetu.
[This message has been edited by eetu (edited November 01, 2000).] |
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ime
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| Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2000 9:01 am |
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thanx everyone
i gotta do some work on her hair...
but I don't know how to achieve that kind of hair you did
still in progress
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Skeezer
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| Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 12:24 am |
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Looks good,
The highlight on her cheek is from a strong light source that should reflect on her hair also.
her hair looks a lot better though keep refining.
-Skeez |
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ime
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| Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 12:48 am |
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comments please |
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spooge demon
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| Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 1:02 am |
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No, don't do anything! The first one was perfect!
The eyes are REally well painted. |
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ime
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| Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2000 2:26 am |
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wohooo
the god (demon) of digital brush replied to my post 
thanx everyone
and a compliment from spooge was good as a lightning into the neighbour's garden
i like the first one too, even if it's out of proportions... just the mood of it
I will not refine it anymore.. i'll start a new one with more interesting action (story) in it...
with you guys i'm getting better all the time |
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