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Seraphire
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 Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2000 5:48 pm |
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Hi Everybody!
http://www.geocities.com/seraphirecafe/color/raven.jpg
Supposed to be in snow. Supposed to have pointed ears.
It's a fanart for Faith. http://www.iprimus.ca/~dnhicks/
(Though it doesn't really look like her character.)Stupid me.
Critique away. I'm aware of alot of it's problems. And do know how to go about fixing them now. But I'm new at this painting thing, so I make mistakes. And taking the time to redo things that need to be redone entirely, isn't really in my aggenda. So I'll know better next time, but this one will stay as it is. Probably.
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The Groove is in the Heart!
Seraphire
Michael Jon Birkhofer
Seraphire's Cafe/The Monochrome
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edible snowman
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| Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2000 8:32 pm |
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| her face is kindy lumpy/smudgy to me, im not really sure how to define it. Also it seems like the mouth and neck are a little small. Out of curiosity, what are those white circles for? |
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Seraphire
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| Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2000 5:49 am |
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Yep, I know exactly what your talking about the uhm... lumpyness. And I agree about the neck and mouth.
The white circles were supposed to be snow. As it would look really close to us, and out of focus. I should go back and soften the edges and make them not so uniform.
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Michael Jon Birkhofer
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