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Topic: Art Thieves and Window Shoppers |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 8
Views: 4649
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2005 7:27 am Subject: Art Thieves and Window Shoppers |
The old guy looks wierd. I dunno what it is about him but he doesnt seem as clean as the other characters and the colors look wierd on him. I like it a lot though  |
Topic: The first time we never forgets!! |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 12
Views: 6685
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2005 9:30 am Subject: The first time we never forgets!! |
His face is too white and the values of light and dark are very extreme. At first I thought it was an all-red guy with a white ninja-mask on or something. Try looking at reference photos of faces to f ... |
Topic: Baseball player. |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 1
Views: 1462
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 5:25 pm Subject: Baseball player. |
I don't know if you were going for a realistic look or more of a cartoon look but if I were to say anything, I'd say be a little more adventurous with your color values. Right now, it's all very monoc ... |
Topic: Minotaurus WIP |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 3
Views: 2615
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 3:41 pm Subject: Minotaurus WIP |
That's hot! The axe is beautiful! |
Topic: Valentine bot |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 4
Views: 2453
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 3:37 pm Subject: Valentine bot |
I'm not sure about values or what-not, but I think the legs are boring. Maybe you could do the kind of coy toe-to ground pose that is impossible to describe. Kind of the leg thing you see comic charac ... |
Topic: Portrait [updated] |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 11
Views: 4093
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 3:35 pm Subject: Portrait [updated] |
The shoulders infinitely improve this. Also, don't over-work this piece, it looks very nice as it is  |
Topic: <<Animations Teasers>> |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 28
Views: 12087
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 8:27 pm Subject: <<Animations Teasers>> |
wow, I loved both of these anims. The animation in Citeria was so slick and professional. Great . Wish the movies on the site were a little higher resolution though, so I could see the details and s ... |
Topic: Your Olympic Hero |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 1
Views: 1503
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 8:22 pm Subject: Your Olympic Hero |
This should definitely be in the WIP forum.
Second, there are a lot of anatomical issues. It looks like you vaguely copied down a person figure and then added in details where you "thought" they sh ... |
Topic: Dancing Death |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 2
Views: 2143
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 6:40 pm Subject: Dancing Death |
Only crit I have is the foreshortening on his lower legs is way too extreme. His legs are all stumpy. |
Topic: hanging man |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 1
Views: 1432
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2004 11:42 pm Subject: hanging man |
Wow! I like the style of this. Matrix-inspired obviously with the plugs on the body. The mouth reminds me a lot of Peter Chung's stuff (the guy from Aeon Flux and some of the Animatrix movies) so I th ... |
Topic: a weird dream I had (post yours too) |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 19
Views: 5283
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 7:30 pm Subject: a weird dream I had (post yours too) |
If I was at all motivated, I'd do one I had last year at college of me and my friends flying around my room while a pair of boots tapdanced on the ceiling.
ps. I have fucked up dreams  |
Topic: Funky business |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 2
Views: 1741
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 11:59 am Subject: Funky business |
Hmm, it looks like it could be good, but as of right now looks unfinished. The linework looks like it was probably real solid and good, but the coloring looks bleh. Also his left hand looks like it w ... |
Topic: Chaos Champion centrefold |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 6
Views: 3828
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat May 15, 2004 8:18 pm Subject: Chaos Champion centrefold |
Actually, Pringle, the cloak is translucent, not transparent. Only light comes through, and you can't actually distinguish objects on the other side. The More You Know
This knight is b ... |
Topic: [female character] .blades. |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 19
Views: 12209
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat May 15, 2004 8:07 pm Subject: [female character] .blades. |
That's what my eyes did when I saw this piece. Honestly. You are amazing. |
Topic: One of my first MS Paint pieces, what do you think? |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 6
Views: 3762
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat May 15, 2004 7:48 pm Subject: One of my first MS Paint pieces, what do you think? |
I like the first one a lot better actually. And there's no lensflare. Lensflares = satan incarnate. |
Topic: Creature illos |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 14
Views: 5872
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed May 12, 2004 10:57 am Subject: Creature illos |
That second one reminds me of the netches from Morrowind |
Topic: Weekly Drawing - Week 17 - Topic : *Closed* |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 17
Views: 5839
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2004 4:36 pm Subject: Weekly Drawing - Week 17 - Topic : *Closed* |
Wow Matthew, very dramatic composition. If you worked more on that you could totally turn it into an amazing picture  |
Topic: Lord Of The Rings - Fanart - Themed thread |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 56
Views: 22985
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2004 8:35 pm Subject: Lord Of The Rings - Fanart - Themed thread |
In Dreamcatcher's defense, I just looked at the photo reference which would have been used for this picture, and there are quite a few differences between the sketch and the photo. variances in shadow ... |
Topic: Animation: Lipsync |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 1
Views: 1421
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 9:22 pm Subject: Animation: Lipsync |
Only crit I have is that his lip when it's open seems to be in a permanent smile on the left side, so it makes it look a bit unnatural when he talks. I dunno how to describe it. Good work though, I lo ... |
Topic: Ritus Ara |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 8
Views: 3391
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 11:10 am Subject: Ritus Ara |
Amazing color and sense of life to this picture. It reminds me of like Escaflowne. I lvoe it  |
Topic: evironment.swamp |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 6
Views: 3030
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2003 9:50 am Subject: evironment.swamp |
It looks pretty darned good, but I'm strangely reminded of Morrowind..... Only this looks alot better. Don't have anything important or relevant to comment about it, except the trees in the backgro ... |
Topic: Low Down Kung Fu |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 4
Views: 2070
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 11:39 am Subject: Low Down Kung Fu |
Everything is very clean and well done, but the guy on the right looks as if he's leaning forward and I'd also say his pose is a bit static considering all of the action going on. |
Topic: hellboy-inspired nazi icthyo sapien |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 14
Views: 5977
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2003 12:53 pm Subject: hellboy-inspired nazi icthyo sapien |
Looks really awesome! The swastika is the wrong way, if you were really going for the nazi-ish look, that is. |
Topic: Signature Images |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 132
Views: 45872
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2003 8:59 am Subject: Re: wtf |
WOW yo
im 40!!!
you motherfucker
if u dont shut up im gonna kick your ass so badly you wont have one
'Lo, I am ruptured.
I don't want to ignore people like this. They provide a ... |
Topic: She's Gone |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 3
Views: 2215
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2003 1:29 pm Subject: She's Gone |
I like the non-blurred version most. |
Topic: Kimono |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 4
Views: 1877
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2003 12:06 pm Subject: Kimono |
Nice! Reminds me a lot of one of my friends' styles.
The face and hair are really well done, as are the designs and the folds in the back. The folds on the arm, however, look off. They look too uni ... |
Topic: I never gonna learn to draw |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 6
Views: 2859
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sun May 25, 2003 5:31 pm Subject: I never gonna learn to draw |
You need to get a better attitude towards your art in order to get anywhere. Then you need to practice. Find something that you love and are interested in, and draw it from reference or from life. For ... |
Topic: Robot�s Cry |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 2
Views: 1537
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sun May 25, 2003 5:18 pm Subject: Robot�s Cry |
Hi! I'm surprised no one's replied to this. I really like the composition on this piece. The only thing I find hard to distinguish is the whole face area of the robot. If I didn't know the title of th ... |
Topic: "Bird of Paradise" |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 65
Views: 23185
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Feb 12, 2003 6:03 pm Subject: "Bird of Paradise" |
I don't mean to be intruding, but I'd really like to see you factor some of the more appropriate comments into your images. Even if the final product is already made for the client, you should try to ... |
Topic: Self-destruct |
mindlesswraith
Replies: 30
Views: 11731
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sun Jan 12, 2003 3:40 pm Subject: Self-destruct |
What the hell? I've seen this picture before, a long, long time ago.Yeah, like 6 months ago I knew this pic looked familiar too. |
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