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  Topic: Art Thieves and Window Shoppers
mindlesswraith

Replies: 8
Views: 4649

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2005 7:27 am   Subject: Art Thieves and Window Shoppers
The old guy looks wierd. I dunno what it is about him but he doesnt seem as clean as the other characters and the colors look wierd on him. I like it a lot though Very Happy
  Topic: The first time we never forgets!!
mindlesswraith

Replies: 12
Views: 6685

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2005 9:30 am   Subject: The first time we never forgets!!
His face is too white and the values of light and dark are very extreme. At first I thought it was an all-red guy with a white ninja-mask on or something. Try looking at reference photos of faces to f ...
  Topic: Baseball player.
mindlesswraith

Replies: 1
Views: 1462

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2005 5:25 pm   Subject: Baseball player.
I don't know if you were going for a realistic look or more of a cartoon look but if I were to say anything, I'd say be a little more adventurous with your color values. Right now, it's all very monoc ...
  Topic: Minotaurus WIP
mindlesswraith

Replies: 3
Views: 2615

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 3:41 pm   Subject: Minotaurus WIP
That's hot! Shocked The axe is beautiful!
  Topic: Valentine bot
mindlesswraith

Replies: 4
Views: 2453

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 3:37 pm   Subject: Valentine bot
I'm not sure about values or what-not, but I think the legs are boring. Maybe you could do the kind of coy toe-to ground pose that is impossible to describe. Kind of the leg thing you see comic charac ...
  Topic: Portrait [updated]
mindlesswraith

Replies: 11
Views: 4093

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 3:35 pm   Subject: Portrait [updated]
The shoulders infinitely improve this. Also, don't over-work this piece, it looks very nice as it is Smile
  Topic: <<Animations Teasers>>
mindlesswraith

Replies: 28
Views: 12087

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 8:27 pm   Subject: <<Animations Teasers>>
wow, I loved both of these anims. The animation in Citeria was so slick and professional. Great Very Happy. Wish the movies on the site were a little higher resolution though, so I could see the details and s ...
  Topic: Your Olympic Hero
mindlesswraith

Replies: 1
Views: 1503

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 8:22 pm   Subject: Your Olympic Hero
This should definitely be in the WIP forum.

Second, there are a lot of anatomical issues. It looks like you vaguely copied down a person figure and then added in details where you "thought" they sh ...
  Topic: Dancing Death
mindlesswraith

Replies: 2
Views: 2143

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2005 6:40 pm   Subject: Dancing Death
Only crit I have is the foreshortening on his lower legs is way too extreme. His legs are all stumpy.
  Topic: hanging man
mindlesswraith

Replies: 1
Views: 1432

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2004 11:42 pm   Subject: hanging man
Wow! I like the style of this. Matrix-inspired obviously with the plugs on the body. The mouth reminds me a lot of Peter Chung's stuff (the guy from Aeon Flux and some of the Animatrix movies) so I th ...
  Topic: a weird dream I had (post yours too)
mindlesswraith

Replies: 19
Views: 5283

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 7:30 pm   Subject: a weird dream I had (post yours too)
If I was at all motivated, I'd do one I had last year at college of me and my friends flying around my room while a pair of boots tapdanced on the ceiling.

ps. I have fucked up dreams Smile
  Topic: Funky business
mindlesswraith

Replies: 2
Views: 1741

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 11:59 am   Subject: Funky business
Hmm, it looks like it could be good, but as of right now looks unfinished. The linework looks like it was probably real solid and good, but the coloring looks bleh. Also his left hand looks like it w ...
  Topic: Chaos Champion centrefold
mindlesswraith

Replies: 6
Views: 3828

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sat May 15, 2004 8:18 pm   Subject: Chaos Champion centrefold
Actually, Pringle, the cloak is translucent, not transparent. Only light comes through, and you can't actually distinguish objects on the other side. The More You Know Idea Razz

This knight is b ...
  Topic: [female character] .blades.
mindlesswraith

Replies: 19
Views: 12209

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sat May 15, 2004 8:07 pm   Subject: [female character] .blades.
Shocked That's what my eyes did when I saw this piece. Honestly. You are amazing.
  Topic: One of my first MS Paint pieces, what do you think?
mindlesswraith

Replies: 6
Views: 3762

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sat May 15, 2004 7:48 pm   Subject: One of my first MS Paint pieces, what do you think?
I like the first one a lot better actually. And there's no lensflare. Lensflares = satan incarnate.
  Topic: Creature illos
mindlesswraith

Replies: 14
Views: 5872

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed May 12, 2004 10:57 am   Subject: Creature illos
That second one reminds me of the netches from Morrowind
  Topic: Weekly Drawing - Week 17 - Topic : *Closed*
mindlesswraith

Replies: 17
Views: 5839

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2004 4:36 pm   Subject: Weekly Drawing - Week 17 - Topic : *Closed*
Wow Matthew, very dramatic composition. If you worked more on that you could totally turn it into an amazing picture Smile
  Topic: Lord Of The Rings - Fanart - Themed thread
mindlesswraith

Replies: 56
Views: 22985

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2004 8:35 pm   Subject: Lord Of The Rings - Fanart - Themed thread
In Dreamcatcher's defense, I just looked at the photo reference which would have been used for this picture, and there are quite a few differences between the sketch and the photo. variances in shadow ...
  Topic: Animation: Lipsync
mindlesswraith

Replies: 1
Views: 1421

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2004 9:22 pm   Subject: Animation: Lipsync
Only crit I have is that his lip when it's open seems to be in a permanent smile on the left side, so it makes it look a bit unnatural when he talks. I dunno how to describe it. Good work though, I lo ...
  Topic: Ritus Ara
mindlesswraith

Replies: 8
Views: 3391

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2004 11:10 am   Subject: Ritus Ara
Amazing color and sense of life to this picture. It reminds me of like Escaflowne. I lvoe it Very Happy
  Topic: evironment.swamp
mindlesswraith

Replies: 6
Views: 3030

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2003 9:50 am   Subject: evironment.swamp
It looks pretty darned good, but I'm strangely reminded of Morrowind..... Only this looks alot better. Don't have anything important or relevant to comment about it, except the trees in the backgro ...
  Topic: Low Down Kung Fu
mindlesswraith

Replies: 4
Views: 2070

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 11:39 am   Subject: Low Down Kung Fu
Everything is very clean and well done, but the guy on the right looks as if he's leaning forward and I'd also say his pose is a bit static considering all of the action going on.
  Topic: hellboy-inspired nazi icthyo sapien
mindlesswraith

Replies: 14
Views: 5977

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2003 12:53 pm   Subject: hellboy-inspired nazi icthyo sapien
Looks really awesome! The swastika is the wrong way, if you were really going for the nazi-ish look, that is.
  Topic: Signature Images
mindlesswraith

Replies: 132
Views: 45872

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2003 8:59 am   Subject: Re: wtf
WOW yo
im 40!!!
you motherfucker
if u dont shut up im gonna kick your ass so badly you wont have one
Evil or Very Mad Mad

'Lo, I am ruptured.

I don't want to ignore people like this. They provide a ...
  Topic: She's Gone
mindlesswraith

Replies: 3
Views: 2215

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2003 1:29 pm   Subject: She's Gone
I like the non-blurred version most.
  Topic: Kimono
mindlesswraith

Replies: 4
Views: 1877

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2003 12:06 pm   Subject: Kimono
Nice! Reminds me a lot of one of my friends' styles.

The face and hair are really well done, as are the designs and the folds in the back. The folds on the arm, however, look off. They look too uni ...
  Topic: I never gonna learn to draw
mindlesswraith

Replies: 6
Views: 2859

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun May 25, 2003 5:31 pm   Subject: I never gonna learn to draw
You need to get a better attitude towards your art in order to get anywhere. Then you need to practice. Find something that you love and are interested in, and draw it from reference or from life. For ...
  Topic: Robot�s Cry
mindlesswraith

Replies: 2
Views: 1537

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun May 25, 2003 5:18 pm   Subject: Robot�s Cry
Hi! I'm surprised no one's replied to this. I really like the composition on this piece. The only thing I find hard to distinguish is the whole face area of the robot. If I didn't know the title of th ...
  Topic: "Bird of Paradise"
mindlesswraith

Replies: 65
Views: 23185

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Feb 12, 2003 6:03 pm   Subject: "Bird of Paradise"
I don't mean to be intruding, but I'd really like to see you factor some of the more appropriate comments into your images. Even if the final product is already made for the client, you should try to ...
  Topic: Self-destruct
mindlesswraith

Replies: 30
Views: 11731

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Jan 12, 2003 3:40 pm   Subject: Self-destruct
What the hell? I've seen this picture before, a long, long time ago.Yeah, like 6 months ago Razz I knew this pic looked familiar too.
 
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