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Topic: screeching brake |
bumble
Replies: 12
Views: 3407
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Jul 18, 2002 10:20 pm Subject: i am new |
is there ink involved in the darkest darks? I'm confuzed as to why some parts look as thought you paid great attention to value changes and others look like you drew with marker over a magazine?
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Topic: NEW PS PORTRAIT FROM ME. |
bumble
Replies: 20
Views: 4784
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 11:53 pm Subject: NEW PS PORTRAIT FROM ME. |
Nice paint work. Something that bugs me is her radioactive forhead though. Why that green line? I think you used that color nicely under her eyebrow. That green hairline is weird though. Sometimes it' ... |
Topic: Jeanne d'Arc |
bumble
Replies: 6
Views: 2095
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 11:43 pm Subject: Jeanne d'Arc |
Did you post to defend yourself or to recieve critique? Do something with her hand. How often do you find a fist that makes a square like that? I dig your cast shadow but it DOES make her look like sh ... |
Topic: accelerator |
bumble
Replies: 25
Views: 5503
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 11:38 pm Subject: accelerator |
I really like this. What do you think about that white line going around her and the bike though? I think this image would be stronger if you made the rider and bike have some relationship to the spac ... |
Topic: stitches - please critique |
bumble
Replies: 10
Views: 2183
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 12:52 am Subject: stitches - please critique |
I've done a lot of disquisting drawings involving stiched lips, eyes, scalps and so forth. Your piece seems to look like you drew simple black lines over some fairly passive lips. As an artist you hav ... |
Topic: pirate with sword |
bumble
Replies: 67
Views: 21302
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 12:24 am Subject: pirate with sword |
Yo Mr. Mullins. What do think about cleaning up some of those figures in the mid-ground? I know in perspective they would be out of focus like they are. I guess my comment is about the possition of th ... |
Topic: Please tell mr what you think so far!!!! |
bumble
Replies: 43
Views: 9974
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 12:15 am Subject: Please tell mr what you think so far!!!! |
well, aside from the pointless arguing i do have some constructive advise for you. You see to the lower right how your castle structure fades into the flames. The idea is that they don't have to be b ... |
Topic: Please tell mr what you think so far!!!! |
bumble
Replies: 43
Views: 9974
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 12:09 am Subject: Please tell mr what you think so far!!!! |
Hey man it's not my work. I'm interested in constantly improving. Which can be accomplished by studying others work. I know an artists that buys famous artists work like Dalhi, Picasso, Jean-Michel Ba ... |
Topic: Please tell mr what you think so far!!!! |
bumble
Replies: 43
Views: 9974
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2001 10:43 am Subject: Please tell mr what you think so far!!!! |
I dunno, maybe it's a flaw of the visual medium. When you borrow with literature you can at least put side notes. However, I think you are talented enough to create your own castle structure. Just as ... |
Topic: GIGANTOR SELF PORTRAIT! WOOF! |
bumble
Replies: 14
Views: 3277
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2001 9:40 am Subject: GIGANTOR SELF PORTRAIT! WOOF! |
Thanks everyone for your thoughts. I like this online critique because people can be as ruthless as they want.
My comments aren't intended to be geared toward defending my work here... but I will p ... |
Topic: Self Portrait |
bumble
Replies: 6
Views: 1947
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 11:49 pm Subject: Self Portrait |
It was my final for drawing 1 so I was under strict deadlines. Sorry about the big jpeg. I chop it down for easier viewing. I had tried to work from a photo and drawing but I didn't have enough time a ... |
Topic: GIGANTOR SELF PORTRAIT! WOOF! |
bumble
Replies: 14
Views: 3277
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 11:13 pm Subject: GIGANTOR SELF PORTRAIT! WOOF! |
GOOD LORD! I'm just posting artowrk here! Was trying to get critiques of my work not my sexuality! And yes I go to SCAD. |
Topic: GIGANTOR SELF PORTRAIT! WOOF! |
bumble
Replies: 14
Views: 3277
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 11:02 pm Subject: GIGANTOR SELF PORTRAIT! WOOF! |
Helloooo! Just thought I'd post this in the finished section. It's charcoal. Done in 2 sittings. ENJOY!
http://www.jenniferever.freeservers.com/Main/meandME2.jpg |
Topic: no naked women in this thread,just... |
bumble
Replies: 6
Views: 1677
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 10:42 pm Subject: no naked women in this thread,just... |
I dig it. My only gripe is that the light source is really confusing. Is it coming from behind the trees? Or is it coming from somewhere infront of the front door? |
Topic: Battlefield Orch [ work in progress] |
bumble
Replies: 4
Views: 2032
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 10:25 pm Subject: Battlefield Orch [ work in progress] |
When your adding things to the background the theory is that whatever it is your adding, it will lose it's color as it reciedes into space. Becoming more like the color of the back ground it's receidi ... |
Topic: Looking for thoughts/suggestions... |
bumble
Replies: 14
Views: 2758
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 10:13 pm Subject: Looking for thoughts/suggestions... |
I really enjoy your seperation of foreground, midground, and background. HUGE sense of depth and movement. Wich is perfect for a mellow somber boy floating through the night sky. Very successful. |
Topic: Self Portrait |
bumble
Replies: 6
Views: 1947
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 9:59 pm Subject: Self Portrait |
Mezoic- Whats your name? Are you one of Professor Mark's Students? Or are you a Professor yourself? |
Topic: Self Portrait |
bumble
Replies: 6
Views: 1947
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 2:49 am Subject: Self Portrait |
This is something I did while in school. It's Charcoal, drawn from life. About 12 hrs work. Thoughts or suggestions? This is my first time posting any work on this forum. Thanks http://www.jenni ... |
Topic: Traditioanl Sculpture |
bumble
Replies: 4
Views: 1376
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Forum: Digital Art Discussion Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 1:16 am Subject: Traditioanl Sculpture |
danka... |
Topic: Traditioanl Sculpture |
bumble
Replies: 4
Views: 1376
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Forum: Digital Art Discussion Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2001 8:51 pm Subject: Traditioanl Sculpture |
I've been wanting to do a clay sculpture for quite some time now. The problem is that I live in a small town and there isn't a local store that carries sculpting supplies. Does anyone know where I can ... |
Topic: Drawing Pencils |
bumble
Replies: 13
Views: 3052
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Forum: Digital Art Discussion Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2001 8:40 pm Subject: Drawing Pencils |
I find the woodless graphite pencils very useful. You can make a large variation of lines with it. Also, I find it useful to break a new one in half, sharpen, and use kneaded eraser as a pen cap so to ... |
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