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  Topic: zeppelinsho
Ritaku

Replies: 9
Views: 3284

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2004 12:42 pm   Subject: zeppelinsho
personally i would like to see a combination of the two. the coloured lines works quite well with the face and lower legs i thought, but the black lines had a stronger impact etc. coloured definitely ...
  Topic: first post. new and improved
Ritaku

Replies: 2
Views: 1544

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2004 9:46 am   Subject: first post. new and improved
first off, you might wanna edit those to be just links, cuz they only worked for me when i copy and pasted the urls into another window. other than that i like the shading on the little alien, nice an ...
  Topic: New here first post
Ritaku

Replies: 1
Views: 1084

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2004 1:05 pm   Subject: New here first post
it would help to show us the images you used for these as well. that way we don't criticise things that came from the source rather than things you did yourself. also the man looks like he has no ass ...
  Topic: WARNING: some nudity -- arm problem
Ritaku

Replies: 2
Views: 1675

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2004 2:03 pm   Subject: WARNING: some nudity -- arm problem
ok i'm no anatomy genious so this is probably more opinion or something but from what i can tell. you need to make the arm/hand get larger as it gets nearer to us, likewise with the gun. also she has ...
  Topic: Pencil/Paper v1.0 Turtle drawing
Ritaku

Replies: 5
Views: 1884

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2004 1:55 pm   Subject: Pencil/Paper v1.0 Turtle drawing
yeah i know what you mean. like chinese whisper, where the message is completely wrong by the end of it! so asides from a flawed source image, anything to crit on that i myself have done?
  Topic: critiques?
Ritaku

Replies: 2
Views: 1083

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2004 11:50 am   Subject: critiques?
well i like the head in the first one, the overall image of the third one, and the sketchiness of that last one. also i kinda like the second one, though i think you should try redoing it on a much la ...
  Topic: Pencil/Paper v1.0 Turtle drawing
Ritaku

Replies: 5
Views: 1884

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2004 10:03 am   Subject: Pencil/Paper v1.0 Turtle drawing
ok i scanned in the little picture from the book i was using. i think i misjudged the size of the shell and a little bit of the lighting on it in comparison to the rest but i'm not sure.

http://rit ...
  Topic: Pencil/Paper v1.0 Turtle drawing
Ritaku

Replies: 5
Views: 1884

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2004 3:59 am   Subject: Pencil/Paper v1.0 Turtle drawing
hey, i think i might leave the fins as lineart for a nice effect but its tempting to fill them in with shade for the moment. this is something to go with me art stuff for my A-levels. comments crits e ...
  Topic: Distorted Angel
Ritaku

Replies: 12
Views: 4313

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2004 2:02 pm   Subject: Distorted Angel
i am absolutely in no way a pro at this, so my paintover is probably wrong too Rolling Eyes , but it's an improvement anyways, heh.

http://www20.brinkster.com/mosspatch/evil_lady2co2%20copy.jpg

I not ...
  Topic: Distorted Angel
Ritaku

Replies: 12
Views: 4313

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2004 8:31 pm   Subject: Distorted Angel
ok i thank you for the comments and understand that my anatomy isn't great compared to most people here, (even though last time you replied it was a little smarmy "pencil and paper v1.0" is not exactl ...
  Topic: Distorted Angel
Ritaku

Replies: 12
Views: 4313

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2004 4:29 pm   Subject: Distorted Angel
awww... c'mon!!! i know the anatomy is a little flawed (ahem..) but i'd really appreciate some tips, paintovers, criticism, things that i actually did right etc, else i'll never improve much.... anyon ...
  Topic: Distorted Angel
Ritaku

Replies: 12
Views: 4313

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2004 12:44 pm   Subject: Distorted Angel
Hi, i know the anatomy is pretty gruesome on the image and all but i'm hoping to get some pointers from you people on that and as i practise and stuff please. i can see a coupla things wrong with the ...
  Topic: Fantasy elements on steam engine? What the...
Ritaku

Replies: 3
Views: 1906

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 9:51 am   Subject: Fantasy elements on steam engine? What the...
hey i think thats really good.... i wouldn't have said there was anything wrong with the lighting except maybe the light coming from the one attached to the side. it doesn't seem to be casting light ...
  Topic: sketchism (very rough)
Ritaku

Replies: 3
Views: 1826

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 9:26 am   Subject: sketchism (very rough)
ok thats fair enough i did ask for some harsh criticism but that didn't really help with these specific pictures.... i know my anatomy isn't great and did i mention they were VERY ROUGH sketches?

h ...
  Topic: sketchism (very rough)
Ritaku

Replies: 3
Views: 1826

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 7:00 am   Subject: sketchism (very rough)
hey-o. thought i would post these sketches i did the other day, they only took a coupla mins each but i think i managed to portray my ideas at least. i know they're not brilliant (and i am making the ...
  Topic: Need Guidance please...
Ritaku

Replies: 1
Views: 870

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2003 1:31 pm   Subject: Need Guidance please...
well the overall anatomy isn't horrific or anything, just pretty flat and lifeless in short. i think you've done especially well on his left shoulder with the blue light underneath etc, just try not t ...
  Topic: skadiddle
Ritaku

Replies: 3
Views: 1291

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2003 2:38 pm   Subject: skadiddle
y'know i think i agree.... ah well i'd still appreciate any comments. i think i'm gonna redo one of my old pictures or something soon.

this was just a little bit of messing with my graphics tablet ...
  Topic: Mummy Character Concept
Ritaku

Replies: 6
Views: 2386

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2003 3:08 am   Subject: Mummy Character Concept
i like the style and all that malarky so nothing to say is actually "wrong" or anything from my perspective.

however... ( Very Happy )... i think what your friend here lacks is some high definition and in ...
  Topic: skadiddle
Ritaku

Replies: 3
Views: 1291

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2003 4:29 pm   Subject: skadiddle
i just KNOW i could turn this into something useful or particularly interesting as an art piece alone but i'm not sure what, so ideas from you people is what i need for this. it was basically a bit of ...
  Topic: Face portrait. Tips needed.
Ritaku

Replies: 15
Views: 3047

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2003 12:59 am   Subject: Face portrait. Tips needed.
i agree about the black lines around the eyes and mouth, they work nicely and give4 the image a little more character. also i think the more stylised earlier version was nicer to look at in some ways ...
  Topic: note in a bottle
Ritaku

Replies: 9
Views: 1906

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Jul 15, 2003 12:45 am   Subject: note in a bottle
i like this quite a lot. not overly detailed at the moment but it still has a nice rounded feel to it. bottle looks in a good place now but i just thought maybe there would be some vague distorted sha ...
  Topic: VGAnsi (long long long long drawing)
Ritaku

Replies: 2
Views: 1033

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2003 1:15 pm   Subject: VGAnsi (long long long long drawing)
i quite like it although i think it needs a bit of work still. the moon goes to black yet the background colour is blue, so maybe some blending there and a smoother curve in the moon shape perhaps.
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  Topic: What the problem is?
Ritaku

Replies: 2
Views: 1132

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2003 1:07 pm   Subject: What the problem is?
ahem... wrong section for starters i think but nevermind, as for the jpeg off hard drive question, you have to upload to a host like homestead or freewebs or something (freewebs is probably good for y ...
  Topic: firebunny wip
Ritaku

Replies: 4
Views: 1369

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2003 1:00 pm   Subject: firebunny wip
oo i like the colours you're using. also you got some nice sharp edges of shading for a nice effect. to crit i would say maybe the head is positioned just SLIGHTLY too far to one side to seem like a p ...
  Topic: Naked angel and BIGeye :D
Ritaku

Replies: 2
Views: 1568

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2003 4:50 am   Subject: Naked angel and BIGeye :D
i have GOT to start learning to use paints.... i can do a tiny bit of watercolour but thats about it, the rest is dry media like pastilles and pencil. i like the eye, you have a nice array of colours ...
  Topic: Angel (yes *yawn yawn*) remake thingy
Ritaku

Replies: 2
Views: 1173

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2003 12:48 am   Subject: Angel (yes *yawn yawn*) remake thingy
i'm not sure i fully follow you when you say negative space although i think i catch your drift. not really enough filled in and too much space around the outside yes? thanks for the crits and i DID s ...
  Topic: Legendary beast
Ritaku

Replies: 3
Views: 1856

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2003 6:13 am   Subject: Legendary beast
i don't see why this has no reply! i like the contrast you got in. while the colours are 'uninteresting' apart from the eyes you made them stand out nicely and it has a slight edge of sketchiness too ...
  Topic: Angel (yes *yawn yawn*) remake thingy
Ritaku

Replies: 2
Views: 1173

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2003 5:58 am   Subject: Angel (yes *yawn yawn*) remake thingy
it did start out as the following image from a while back (doesn't feel that long but i think it might have been...) and it was supposed to be a vampire/angel hybrid type thing. i might make it more v ...
  Topic: ribbonwingedbishonen
Ritaku

Replies: 6
Views: 2296

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2003 5:32 am   Subject: ribbonwingedbishonen
legs are fine from where i'm sitting, good anatomy etc. i like it. although maybe the pose is a little cliche but hey you still do a good job of it. as for the ribbons, i can see pretty much exactly h ...
  Topic: here's a robotdrgn
Ritaku

Replies: 10
Views: 3627

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2003 5:24 am   Subject: here's a robotdrgn
i like the idea and how you've made it look personally. although if you want a mechanical look, maybe you should try doing lots of smaller details with multiple parts (if that made any sense....). and ...
 
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