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  Topic: Milo in Progress
PuC

Replies: 3
Views: 2104

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 11:08 pm   Subject: Milo in Progress
I like the expression on his face, its hard to describe, kinda like in between a lot of different emotions, which is interesting.

a few tips: try to work on it more as a whole before zooming in on ...
  Topic: Sci-Fi/Noir
PuC

Replies: 5
Views: 3855

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 10:28 pm   Subject: Sci-Fi/Noir
hmm they look very static, its all round curves no straight edges, very soft strokes.. the poses are too balanced to give it the moving feeling.
My advice is loosen it up. I get the feeling your kind ...
  Topic: Back to Sijun Forums
PuC

Replies: 9
Views: 3480

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 10:07 pm   Subject: Back to Sijun Forums
I'd like to see a the high resolution version because lots of the detail seems to go lost now, it looks beatiful.

my crits: perspective looks a little bit off on the edge of the axe blade and the a ...
  Topic: lately
PuC

Replies: 8
Views: 2771

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2005 9:59 pm   Subject: lately
awsome work man, I love the characters, colours and perspectives even though its not always totally correct. amazing stuff.
  Topic: Just a doodle...
PuC

Replies: 3
Views: 1806

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 5:52 pm   Subject: Just a doodle...
sometimes = at the back of the bikeship

Ps.
sorry for the repost, I'm stoned.
  Topic: Just a doodle...
PuC

Replies: 3
Views: 1806

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 5:39 pm   Subject: Just a doodle...
the materials look very nice, coloring and concept look great.. my only crit is that the perspective is a little off sometimes..
Keep it up!
  Topic: My first "real" artwork : Chaos Warrior [request c
PuC

Replies: 7
Views: 4168

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2004 5:50 pm   Subject: My first "real" artwork : Chaos Warrior [request c
Very nice work.. the added lights (reflections) I think would make an improvement, it kinda connects to two parts together (the sky and the warrior) I definetly like your colours and the way you did t ...
  Topic: Need C&C on website
PuC

Replies: 7
Views: 3186

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2004 6:08 am   Subject: Need C&C on website
hmm the flash part kinda collides with the black surrounding, which looks kinda cheap, and you might consider using a different font, times new roman just seems so standard.
The flash part looks ok t ...
  Topic: Space Opera Characters : Large Files
PuC

Replies: 3
Views: 2351

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2004 5:54 am   Subject: Space Opera Characters : Large Files
very nice colours and colouring.. The characters have a cool original feel to them.. cool stuff!
  Topic: Angry Orc
PuC

Replies: 3
Views: 2226

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Apr 07, 2004 1:27 pm   Subject: Angry Orc
very cool.. only it seems a bit flat and although I think the head looks great, his expression is not very clear, he could be screaming in anger or in pain, also the muscles in the middle of the neck ...
  Topic: one page comic
PuC

Replies: 6
Views: 2598

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2004 1:07 am   Subject: one page comic
Thanks for the comments people, I thought it was pretty much finished but now I think theres still some things I could do with it.
I'm afraid it wont get past this stage for a while though, I worked ...
  Topic: Summon Light
PuC

Replies: 6
Views: 2936

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2004 11:29 am   Subject: Summon Light
fkin beautiful! my only crit is the shades in his right hand looks a bit weird.
  Topic: lighting help etc
PuC

Replies: 2
Views: 1551

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2004 3:33 pm   Subject: lighting help etc
the light seems to be coming from the side instead of the front
  Topic: one page comic
PuC

Replies: 6
Views: 2598

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2004 3:22 pm   Subject: one page comic
I did this for school, its my second try at making something in photoshop,
hope you like it:

http://student-kmt.hku.nl/~marcus1/strip_final.jpg

maybe you could give me some tips?
  Topic: the zombie gets it!! :D
PuC

Replies: 3
Views: 2466

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Mar 03, 2004 1:18 am   Subject: the zombie gets it!! :D
I like your style.. just gotta keep watchin the basics, the closest leg of the soldier is way to big, perspective is a little different between legs and torso, this makes his stance less convincing ( ...
  Topic: Elf Assassin WIP
PuC

Replies: 10
Views: 3929

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2003 3:13 pm   Subject: Elf Assassin WIP
I really like the pose and the expression on her face, and the pose of the hand is real nice, although the anatomic proportions of the fingers are way off..
I really think you should be less afraid o ...
  Topic: Character: Elf Girl
PuC

Replies: 5
Views: 3099

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2003 2:37 pm   Subject: Character: Elf Girl
nice shading, but the proportions in the face don't seem very elflike to me (big mouth, big chin, and small nose), also the shade right next to her mouth is so broad it makes her seem older and uglier ...
  Topic: Kyrian Chronicles - online manga project : the first pages..
PuC

Replies: 12
Views: 4238

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Feb 04, 2003 3:15 pm   Subject: Kyrian Chronicles - online manga project : the first pages..
i like your manga, I would try to make it a bit less clean though, it looks kinda plastic sometimes ya know?
oh and on the text.. "to die" should definetly be "DEATH!"
in the part where he sais get ...
  Topic: 14 years old...and new to the Forums :D
PuC

Replies: 15
Views: 4754

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Jan 30, 2003 2:22 pm   Subject: 14 years old...and new to the Forums :D
Hey, ik heb je site bekeken je maakt echt fokking goeie manga.. het is minder clean dan doorgaans maar dat maakt het juist een hele eigen stijl, de beelden die je gebruikt zijn heel mooi.. als je echt ...
  Topic: Inspired by Magnacarta 2
PuC

Replies: 12
Views: 4361

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 12:40 pm   Subject: Inspired by Magnacarta 2
hi mathew, I;m not very good at anatomy myself but I think I have a tip that could help you out.
Try to start your sketch with a rough image of the whole person, then make sure the proportions are co ...
  Topic: some old weird stuff
PuC

Replies: 18
Views: 7465

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Nov 06, 2002 4:38 am   Subject: some old weird stuff
cool! very unique style there.. plus cool ideas.. great! post more!
  Topic: stone monkey
PuC

Replies: 14
Views: 4574

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Oct 30, 2002 4:18 am   Subject: stone monkey
very cool man! Your work is all that..

Only little bit of crit i have is the back, It is twisted but you cant see that, which makes it a bit less natural.. you know if you look at the pic you gotta s ...
  Topic: C&C: More Comic Book Styles
PuC

Replies: 3
Views: 1484

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2002 11:55 pm   Subject: C&C: More Comic Book Styles
very cool, but what happened to her right leg?
  Topic: 3D model anime type Mech
PuC

Replies: 16
Views: 6800

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2002 12:05 pm   Subject: 3D model anime type Mech
yeah make the hands bigger cuz then hes really cool an he grabs the bad guy BAM BUZZZ ratatatatataDANG! en taraaaaaa! he SAVES THE DAY!!!

images/smiles/icon_confused.gif

Alright so that didnt mak ...
  Topic: Some 3D stuff
PuC

Replies: 4
Views: 1339

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2002 4:18 am   Subject: Some 3D stuff
wow man really freakin nice!!!
so when are computer games coming out with 3d animations that look like this? I also really like your ideas you got a great style.
  Topic: Green monster with horns...
PuC

Replies: 9
Views: 2628

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2002 8:17 am   Subject: Green monster with horns...
images/smiles/icon_eek.gif Very cool work, I like the idea 2
maybe make a comic with him?

some comments that might help:
I'd make the legs much longer (but you probably heard that already images/sm ...
 
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