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  Topic: 1800s man
Link_omega

Replies: 5
Views: 2351

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Dec 31, 2002 6:10 pm   Subject: 1800s man
Need to finish his hands and left foot.

Smile
  Topic: abandoned angel
Link_omega

Replies: 10
Views: 4028

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Dec 31, 2002 6:07 pm   Subject: abandoned angel
Never played Blade runner but I do feal the jist of what your going for.

Her right arm should be visible as was mentioned and also agree that right arm should be darker than her left arm.

Overal ...
  Topic: First painting 'o'
Link_omega

Replies: 14
Views: 3751

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Dec 31, 2002 6:02 pm   Subject: First painting 'o'
Probably be a good time to start going back and giving the body some
detail touches. like on the creases.
Great start though. Hope you luck.
  Topic: Savage Princess...
Link_omega

Replies: 5
Views: 2140

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 8:35 am   Subject: Savage Princess...
Her hips don't seem to fit with the position of her legs. Maybe a small
reposition of them will help.
  Topic: the devil is going banana...
Link_omega

Replies: 5
Views: 2122

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 8:13 am   Subject: the devil is going banana...
How about a flaming bannana field with dancing bannana fiends Twisted Evil
bannana's on the brain anyone? Rolling Eyes
  Topic: the devil is going banana...
Link_omega

Replies: 5
Views: 2122

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 6:13 pm   Subject: the devil is going banana...
Surprised I feal better now Twisted Evil
Going bannannas in the middle of the night Laughing
Goodnight and a have a bannanna day too Wink
  Topic: Need help - Crying Elf
Link_omega

Replies: 10
Views: 3819

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 5:52 pm   Subject: Need help - Crying Elf
Got a new version of my version of the crying elf... enjoy Rolling Eyes
  Topic: Critique both my Critiques and Artwork here...
Link_omega

Replies: 7
Views: 2903

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 5:34 pm   Subject: Critique both my Critiques and Artwork here...
Finally had time for a new piece and to give you other critiquer's out there a chance at my artwork
Enjoy
[url=http://www.angelfire.com/anime2/yellowstar/images/upload/index.html]My Knight
  Topic: Snow begins to fall...
Link_omega

Replies: 9
Views: 1920

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 1:21 pm   Subject: Snow begins to fall...
Very fascinating Wink
  Topic: guy with blades
Link_omega

Replies: 7
Views: 2914

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 1:16 pm   Subject: guy with blades
Their is a small lightling issue it appears that your using multiple
lightsources in which case shading needs to be taken into account...
Personally I like the composure of his design.
  Topic: oh my gawth! :) c&c please please puh-leaaaaze!!!
Link_omega

Replies: 7
Views: 2494

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 1:07 pm   Subject: oh my gawth! :) c&c please please puh-leaaaaze!!!
Evil or Very Mad in most cases the upper lip has a natural darker skin tone than the
lower lip...

lighting appears to originate from the foreground upper middle right at an angle towards the chin in which ...
  Topic: Dogfight
Link_omega

Replies: 20
Views: 8750

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 6:36 pm   Subject: Dogfight
Personally I think you got something going...
If you carefully color it in you'll and give the current image more weight instead having that see through texture or instead make it appear like a pair ...
  Topic: Edgar Allan Poe Sketch - Black Cat
Link_omega

Replies: 8
Views: 2972

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 6:30 pm   Subject: Edgar Allan Poe Sketch - Black Cat
Shocked Shocked Shocked Poor cat Sad
Ouch that must of hurt Evil or Very Mad
Exclamation I'd say in my opinion it definetly look better in color orange color cat
would definitly fit the scene.
  Topic: classicists building
Link_omega

Replies: 3
Views: 1365

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 4:41 pm   Subject: classicists building
Hmm the top of pillars definetly dont correspond to their environments.
Above the pillars the ceiling the direction that you painted celing should all
be in a similar direction so as to indicate de ...
  Topic: Savage Princess...
Link_omega

Replies: 5
Views: 2140

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 4:25 pm   Subject: Savage Princess...
May doubling the dogs size and giving it a saddle will help to give it a slighty
more ferocious look. Very Happy
She seems a little flat probably due to the background.
Enlarge the canvas and redevelop th ...
  Topic: What do I do with this?
Link_omega

Replies: 11
Views: 3948

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 4:21 pm   Subject: What do I do with this?
Put your logo on it and make it into your own personal stamp Very Happy
  Topic: 1st Time post WIP (Kinda sorta nudity)
Link_omega

Replies: 3
Views: 1229

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 4:17 pm   Subject: 1st Time post WIP (Kinda sorta nudity)
Top Left: Great proportions look correct
Top second: Legs too thin Body overall too short. Breasts too circular think of em as teacups the tits are usually towards the outside left or right about a ...
  Topic: Sword-guy <- changed topic title
Link_omega

Replies: 10
Views: 3311

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 3:58 pm   Subject: Sword-guy <- changed topic title
Hmm the sword going behind rock really throughs off the perspective in the
picture. Recommend bring the sword in front of the rock so as make him
look more life size.
Also for the hands just use ...
  Topic: oh my gawth! :) c&c please please puh-leaaaaze!!!
Link_omega

Replies: 7
Views: 2494

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 3:51 pm   Subject: oh my gawth! :) c&c please please puh-leaaaaze!!!
Jag silver lining at her abdomen needs small tweaking to appear to run
along her side. She's a bit zombish looking But fades excellently into her
backdrop. Smile The black eyes perspectively speaking ...
  Topic: B&W sketches...
Link_omega

Replies: 12
Views: 3640

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 3:34 pm   Subject: B&W sketches...
Actually I didn't catch the sixth finger Sad
and yes I do dont I Twisted Evil
Embarassed Usually when I get on I tend hunt anything that appears in need
of C&C and respond to my hearts delight th ...
  Topic: A work in progress
Link_omega

Replies: 13
Views: 4764

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 2:31 pm   Subject: A work in progress
I'd disagree with Marvel the current setup with the gravestones allow for a more subtle way to rotate the viewers vision around the picture rather than just at a particular part of a picture.
but the ...
  Topic: a cg in progres
Link_omega

Replies: 4
Views: 1394

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 1:57 pm   Subject: a cg in progres
A sub-way background will fit the scene just perfectly maybe an old blind
lady with a dog.. Very Happy
  Topic: R3An!m4+i0N W.I.P.
Link_omega

Replies: 3
Views: 1880

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 6:11 pm   Subject: R3An!m4+i0N W.I.P.
Hmm...
The head could be scaled larger and brougth forward to a more proper
location on the body.
WO had a flash back of another critique of an image with same exact
problems. Recommend lookin ...
  Topic: kermit the demon infested frog
Link_omega

Replies: 2
Views: 1496

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 6:01 pm   Subject: kermit the demon infested frog
That be a perfect intro scene to a dos based game Laughing
Now I got that creepy image of Kermit lingering on my mind now Evil or Very Mad
  Topic: Rome, will be updated every other day or so
Link_omega

Replies: 6
Views: 2713

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:54 pm   Subject: Rome, will be updated every other day or so
have to agree with elam those legs are bit short
Love to see an updated version of this scene...
hmm...
The shield would be better of being held at his side so that his arm would
be seen. He looks ...
  Topic: the poulpman on progress
Link_omega

Replies: 1
Views: 984

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:48 pm   Subject: the poulpman on progress
How about a squid cannon similar to fashion of metroid or MegaMan's just for kicks Laughing maybe a squid missile Twisted Evil
Idea How about a squid chick to dig his moves... Wink
  Topic: B&W sketches...
Link_omega

Replies: 12
Views: 3640

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:42 pm   Subject: B&W sketches...
Hmm... Where to start hmm...

how about with
scan01_to.jpg: looks good

scan01_c.jpg:
Hmm the hand and gun still seem to be out of place it needs to be refined a little give definition to the f ...
  Topic: A work in progress
Link_omega

Replies: 13
Views: 4764

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:25 pm   Subject: A work in progress
Embarassed wow isnt a word to apply to this Wink "masterpiece"...

As to critiqueing this I would say that her hand or rather arm look better
with the bracelet and shading to give depth to the deafle ...
  Topic: Sketcho book - pen, ink, boobies, skateboards
Link_omega

Replies: 4
Views: 2021

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:19 pm   Subject: Sketcho book - pen, ink, boobies, skateboards
Hmm Confused different Shocked never seen anything like it ... dont know how to critique this one maybe next time...
  Topic: Clich� sunset -Update
Link_omega

Replies: 6
Views: 1785

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 12:48 pm   Subject: Clich� sunset -Update
The position that the stick touches the ground appears to be slightly behind
your character. maybe a small adjustment to bring it forward.
 
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