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Topic: 1800s man |
Link_omega
Replies: 5
Views: 2351
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Dec 31, 2002 6:10 pm Subject: 1800s man |
Need to finish his hands and left foot.
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Topic: abandoned angel |
Link_omega
Replies: 10
Views: 4028
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Dec 31, 2002 6:07 pm Subject: abandoned angel |
Never played Blade runner but I do feal the jist of what your going for.
Her right arm should be visible as was mentioned and also agree that right arm should be darker than her left arm.
Overal ... |
Topic: First painting 'o' |
Link_omega
Replies: 14
Views: 3751
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Dec 31, 2002 6:02 pm Subject: First painting 'o' |
Probably be a good time to start going back and giving the body some
detail touches. like on the creases.
Great start though. Hope you luck. |
Topic: Savage Princess... |
Link_omega
Replies: 5
Views: 2140
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 8:35 am Subject: Savage Princess... |
Her hips don't seem to fit with the position of her legs. Maybe a small
reposition of them will help. |
Topic: the devil is going banana... |
Link_omega
Replies: 5
Views: 2122
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 8:13 am Subject: the devil is going banana... |
How about a flaming bannana field with dancing bannana fiends
bannana's on the brain anyone?  |
Topic: the devil is going banana... |
Link_omega
Replies: 5
Views: 2122
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 6:13 pm Subject: the devil is going banana... |
I feal better now
Going bannannas in the middle of the night
Goodnight and a have a bannanna day too  |
Topic: Need help - Crying Elf |
Link_omega
Replies: 10
Views: 3819
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 5:52 pm Subject: Need help - Crying Elf |
Got a new version of my version of the crying elf... enjoy  |
Topic: Critique both my Critiques and Artwork here... |
Link_omega
Replies: 7
Views: 2903
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 5:34 pm Subject: Critique both my Critiques and Artwork here... |
Finally had time for a new piece and to give you other critiquer's out there a chance at my artwork
Enjoy
[url=http://www.angelfire.com/anime2/yellowstar/images/upload/index.html]My Knight |
Topic: Snow begins to fall... |
Link_omega
Replies: 9
Views: 1920
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 1:21 pm Subject: Snow begins to fall... |
Very fascinating  |
Topic: guy with blades |
Link_omega
Replies: 7
Views: 2914
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 1:16 pm Subject: guy with blades |
Their is a small lightling issue it appears that your using multiple
lightsources in which case shading needs to be taken into account...
Personally I like the composure of his design. |
Topic: oh my gawth! :) c&c please please puh-leaaaaze!!! |
Link_omega
Replies: 7
Views: 2494
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2002 1:07 pm Subject: oh my gawth! :) c&c please please puh-leaaaaze!!! |
in most cases the upper lip has a natural darker skin tone than the
lower lip...
lighting appears to originate from the foreground upper middle right at an angle towards the chin in which ... |
Topic: Dogfight |
Link_omega
Replies: 20
Views: 8750
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 6:36 pm Subject: Dogfight |
Personally I think you got something going...
If you carefully color it in you'll and give the current image more weight instead having that see through texture or instead make it appear like a pair ... |
Topic: Edgar Allan Poe Sketch - Black Cat |
Link_omega
Replies: 8
Views: 2972
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 6:30 pm Subject: Edgar Allan Poe Sketch - Black Cat |
Poor cat
Ouch that must of hurt
I'd say in my opinion it definetly look better in color orange color cat
would definitly fit the scene. |
Topic: classicists building |
Link_omega
Replies: 3
Views: 1365
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 4:41 pm Subject: classicists building |
Hmm the top of pillars definetly dont correspond to their environments.
Above the pillars the ceiling the direction that you painted celing should all
be in a similar direction so as to indicate de ... |
Topic: Savage Princess... |
Link_omega
Replies: 5
Views: 2140
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 4:25 pm Subject: Savage Princess... |
May doubling the dogs size and giving it a saddle will help to give it a slighty
more ferocious look.
She seems a little flat probably due to the background.
Enlarge the canvas and redevelop th ... |
Topic: What do I do with this? |
Link_omega
Replies: 11
Views: 3948
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 4:21 pm Subject: What do I do with this? |
Put your logo on it and make it into your own personal stamp  |
Topic: 1st Time post WIP (Kinda sorta nudity) |
Link_omega
Replies: 3
Views: 1229
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 4:17 pm Subject: 1st Time post WIP (Kinda sorta nudity) |
Top Left: Great proportions look correct
Top second: Legs too thin Body overall too short. Breasts too circular think of em as teacups the tits are usually towards the outside left or right about a ... |
Topic: Sword-guy <- changed topic title |
Link_omega
Replies: 10
Views: 3311
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 3:58 pm Subject: Sword-guy <- changed topic title |
Hmm the sword going behind rock really throughs off the perspective in the
picture. Recommend bring the sword in front of the rock so as make him
look more life size.
Also for the hands just use ... |
Topic: oh my gawth! :) c&c please please puh-leaaaaze!!! |
Link_omega
Replies: 7
Views: 2494
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 3:51 pm Subject: oh my gawth! :) c&c please please puh-leaaaaze!!! |
Jag silver lining at her abdomen needs small tweaking to appear to run
along her side. She's a bit zombish looking But fades excellently into her
backdrop. The black eyes perspectively speaking ... |
Topic: B&W sketches... |
Link_omega
Replies: 12
Views: 3640
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 3:34 pm Subject: B&W sketches... |
Actually I didn't catch the sixth finger
and yes I do dont I
Usually when I get on I tend hunt anything that appears in need
of C&C and respond to my hearts delight th ... |
Topic: A work in progress |
Link_omega
Replies: 13
Views: 4764
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 2:31 pm Subject: A work in progress |
I'd disagree with Marvel the current setup with the gravestones allow for a more subtle way to rotate the viewers vision around the picture rather than just at a particular part of a picture.
but the ... |
Topic: a cg in progres |
Link_omega
Replies: 4
Views: 1394
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 1:57 pm Subject: a cg in progres |
A sub-way background will fit the scene just perfectly maybe an old blind
lady with a dog..  |
Topic: R3An!m4+i0N W.I.P. |
Link_omega
Replies: 3
Views: 1880
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 6:11 pm Subject: R3An!m4+i0N W.I.P. |
Hmm...
The head could be scaled larger and brougth forward to a more proper
location on the body.
WO had a flash back of another critique of an image with same exact
problems. Recommend lookin ... |
Topic: kermit the demon infested frog |
Link_omega
Replies: 2
Views: 1496
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 6:01 pm Subject: kermit the demon infested frog |
That be a perfect intro scene to a dos based game
Now I got that creepy image of Kermit lingering on my mind now  |
Topic: Rome, will be updated every other day or so |
Link_omega
Replies: 6
Views: 2713
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:54 pm Subject: Rome, will be updated every other day or so |
have to agree with elam those legs are bit short
Love to see an updated version of this scene...
hmm...
The shield would be better of being held at his side so that his arm would
be seen. He looks ... |
Topic: the poulpman on progress |
Link_omega
Replies: 1
Views: 984
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:48 pm Subject: the poulpman on progress |
How about a squid cannon similar to fashion of metroid or MegaMan's just for kicks maybe a squid missile
How about a squid chick to dig his moves...  |
Topic: B&W sketches... |
Link_omega
Replies: 12
Views: 3640
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:42 pm Subject: B&W sketches... |
Hmm... Where to start hmm...
how about with
scan01_to.jpg: looks good
scan01_c.jpg:
Hmm the hand and gun still seem to be out of place it needs to be refined a little give definition to the f ... |
Topic: A work in progress |
Link_omega
Replies: 13
Views: 4764
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:25 pm Subject: A work in progress |
wow isnt a word to apply to this "masterpiece"...
As to critiqueing this I would say that her hand or rather arm look better
with the bracelet and shading to give depth to the deafle ... |
Topic: Sketcho book - pen, ink, boobies, skateboards |
Link_omega
Replies: 4
Views: 2021
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:19 pm Subject: Sketcho book - pen, ink, boobies, skateboards |
Hmm different never seen anything like it ... dont know how to critique this one maybe next time... |
Topic: Clich� sunset -Update |
Link_omega
Replies: 6
Views: 1785
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 12:48 pm Subject: Clich� sunset -Update |
The position that the stick touches the ground appears to be slightly behind
your character. maybe a small adjustment to bring it forward. |
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